It is important to write a good essay in IELTS writing but it’s also very important to be able to check your work for mistakes. This post is about spotting errors in the IELTS writing extracts. Why not try and see which errors you can see and then watch the video to find out which errors I picked up and why.
This is the first extract from the introductory paragraph of an IELTS task 2 essay. What errors do you see?
It is trusted that reading books has more educating benefits than watching TV, especially in encouraging our imaginary world and verbal ability.
In my viewpoint, I definitely do not have any argument about this belief. In my essay, I will discuss about reasons why reading boosts our imaginantion and language skills more than watching telly.
This is already a good piece of writing but it could be better.
The video below will explain the errors that I found and explain why I have highlighted them and how they could be improved.
How did you get on? Did you spot the other error? Please let me know in the comments below.
To find out how to write the perfect introduction paragraph every time, follow this link.
Good luck with your IELTS test.